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(Message started by: okasantina on Dec 7th, 2005, 8:41am)

Title: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d` PrEvIeW:
Post by okasantina on Dec 7th, 2005, 8:41am
It becomes a phenomenal hit  in Forum History ..... The two characters so much inlove has gotten to be so popular invading the whole world even the galaxy..lol...OH WELL... I dont want to get confused reading the story everynow and then.....The chatrooms were invaded by them...whatta a great phenomenon indeed!!!  
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People were talkin about it...laughin about it.....and even sympathized it...well should i say patronizing?? lol
We dont want to bother the story by such reactions...and want it to make a full blown virus here in forum lol....so i made a new thread to talk about it ... Make opinions about the characters and how will it goes.... lmao!  One chatroom is not enough of the space i guess.... [smiley=thump.gif]


So lets hear from them...how they react about this Millenium Event happening in the forum world, well even outside world  ::)  ;D

so members ..... post awayyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!



PS. Any infos, reactions, comments and suggestions regarding the story is purely for fun. Please dont take this so seriously..or else we`ll end of illusioning..lmao!  

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Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  The Game of Love / Director`s Cut
Post by Levy on Dec 7th, 2005, 8:51am
Excellent idea Tina....   [smiley=icon_drink2.gif]

I still need to imagine how i can be an evil bestfriend to Marie.... [smiley=thinking2.gif]

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  The Game of Love / Director`s Cut
Post by okasantina on Dec 7th, 2005, 8:56am

on 12/07/05 at 08:51:25, Levy wrote:
Excellent idea Tina....   [smiley=icon_drink2.gif]

I still need to imagine how i can be an evil bestfriend to Marie.... [smiley=thinking2.gif]



Yeah as what happened in the room ... we need our own space here to discuss and lurk on it..lmao!  I think u need to reminisce when u two became best of friends...are u the supportive one or the nice girl but envy is killing her...like that ...what do u think?  lol  [smiley=icon_drink.gif]

Title: Re: Preview: The Game of Love
Post by nOrKAy on Dec 7th, 2005, 9:04am

Awwww, " A Game Of Love" preview! WOW, this is a good idea! Now every reader can express his/her feelings and thoughts about this love story.


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A Game of Love
Author: Coochie
                   

When it comes to love story reading, I am an avid fan of Nicholas Sparks books. Then I was so happy when Coochie, my one friend ( the author of this online love story ) decided to produce "online" love story and got me as one of the directors and work with Witchy. It is indeed a great experience since I love to read and that I also want to see how can we produce one  and publish.

For what I have read , I am still a bit confused ,so I think I need to read again the book. And I hope to relate my preview/understanding of the story clearer,soon. I'm still in the middle.

So far, it's a great read that I can recommend to everyone who loves love story. It's here where we can see how powerful love is, how pride and games ruin your own relationship.

I am looking forward to a great ending. I am now in page 11.

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Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by CooCHie on Dec 7th, 2005, 1:43pm
Confusions confusions..lol well you have to stick to the story line.  First it was Maria and Waldo's meeting...Then all of a sudden Michael Smith came aboard...then as the story line progresses, Rebecca,  Karen and MIchael Schumacher  characters were added..all these nova and martians thing  i dont know where its heading to but it seems like Michael just had one episode in his life that is out of the world experience thing .... zap..zap and now he is back with Rebecca.....if you follow the characters life, they have their own story to tell...just keep reading and posting your own story of these characters.... this is turning to be a novel ...lol..stay tune..and thanks to all my writers Joel, Wabbit, Davie, Nelson,Fallen, Big Daddy, Pure Evil, Krissy, Witchy, Saffire, Okasan, Grace..because of their creative brain storming imaginations, this story is turning to be the great creation of a crazy love story .. lol keep up the great writing guys!!!. and special thanks to my pretty directors Krissy and Witchy.[smiley=icon_super.gif] [smiley=icon_super.gif] [smiley=icon_super.gif] [smiley=icon_super.gif]

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by CooCHie on Dec 7th, 2005, 3:16pm
;D ;DDang you never know when its going to end..lol so much imagination goin on here..lol...i have to keep going back to check if i got their names right..lol  ;D ;D

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d` PrEv
Post by Saffire_65 on Dec 7th, 2005, 7:24pm
Its been a pleasure to be a part of this Eccentric love story coochie.  I'm glad to be of help to bring Waldo and Maria back together again ;)  Indeed it is very confusing with too many names to follow through but again variety makes it more spicier a love story  ;D  In the beginning there was already a confusion as to who waldo and micheal is LOL Who was in the big city>  and who was Maria's first  choice of man Waldo or Micheal  ???  

Anyway just like to congratulate Coochie for this best seller love story, Krissy and Witchy twinnie for being the best director of this story movie LMBO.  After Nova I wonder if theres other added character to join in the story.  You go ppl!! Love every chapter of this story!!

Best of the very best seller book I've ever read  ~ Saffire tribunal magazine    ;)   :P

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d` PrEv
Post by okasantina on Dec 7th, 2005, 8:10pm
Its really confusing....gosh my eyes wants to close na! llol But Saffie dear Michael is the one who is in the big city eh...and Maria`s first choice is Waldo  [smiley=love2.gif]  ... Dont know if its romantic comedy sci-fic adventure story eh  [smiley=crowded.gif] ok lets return to our movie now...lol!

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d` PrEv
Post by thebeast on Dec 7th, 2005, 9:25pm
I not think any one person should play a specific character..anyone can type what they want for any character but try to stick to the story line..thats what makes it more confusing than what it needs to be. Anyone can type for Michael, Waldo, or Maria or whoever...just stick to the storyline.

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by nOrKAy on Dec 8th, 2005, 2:14am

on 12/07/05 at 21:25:46, thebeast wrote:
I not think any one person should play a specific character..anyone can type what they want for any character but try to stick to the story line..thats what makes it more confusing than what it needs to be. Anyone can type for Michael, Waldo, or Maria or whoever...just stick to the storyline.



Exactly ,Joel. I have told you that before, too since you were changed to Michael. Anybody can act any character. It doesn't mean that when you acted a part of one character, it doesn't mean that you have to act for that one character,only.

For example, if you acted in the first time as Michael, it doesn't mean that you have to act always as Michael. You can also act as Waldo, Maria, Rebecca, or whoever you want to act for. Like you said, as long as you stick to the story line.  ;D

Anyway, I think this thread is not really for comments or to critisize the "online" love story, but it's here to write the story's preview. What the readers' feelings, like for example, how they feel sorry for Maria when Waldo dated Rebecca, how one hates Michael when he showed up into Maria's house with out calling her or informing her first, which caused the trouble because Waldo was there. In that way, readers don't need to enter their comments right there in the thread and interrupt the story.

So, guys, keep writing in behalf of any of the  characters! While, we/every reader is writing their excitement ,feelings and what they didnt want happened or what should they wanted to happen.  ;D

I suggest to every poster to indicate in a close parenthesis ( ) the character he/she is acting for.

I hope though, in the end, we will be evaluated as good directors and Coochie as an admiring author. Hehe. ;D

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Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by okasantina on Dec 8th, 2005, 5:31am

on 12/08/05 at 02:14:05, nOrKAy wrote:
For example, if you acted in the first time as Michael, it doesn't mean that you have to act always as Michael. You can also act as Waldo, Maria, Rebecca, or whoever you want to act for. Like you said, as long as you stick to the story line.  ;D


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I thought and as what i read....if ure a male u can act as Waldo or Michael or any Pontious Pilate lol...and so as the girls..they can act as Maria, Rebecca or Karen..chuk chak cheneses....lol! AS LONG AS IT STICKS TO THE STORYLINE eh  ;D :P

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by thebeast on Dec 8th, 2005, 6:08am

on 12/08/05 at 05:31:53, okasantina wrote:
I thought and as what i read....if ure a male u can act as Waldo or Michael or any Pontious Pilate lol...and so as the girls..they can act as Maria, Rebecca or Karen..chuk chak cheneses....lol! AS LONG AS IT STICKS TO THE STORYLINE eh  ;D :P

well yeah thats what i mean

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by killerabbit on Dec 8th, 2005, 6:29am
Is there an outline?is there a draft for this?I mean come on.LMAO!This is AD-LIP!Correct me if I am wrong :PI thought we were having fun here.LOL>Some people.ROFLMAO

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by okasantina on Dec 8th, 2005, 6:36am

on 12/08/05 at 06:29:52, killerabbit wrote:
Is there an outline?is there a draft for this?I mean come on.LMAO!This is AD-LIP!Correct me if I am wrong :PI thought we were having fun here.LOL>Some people.ROFLMAO



Thats why i did this thread wabbit  :P to have fun here....lmao!  [smiley=icon_drink.gif]

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by nOrKAy on Dec 9th, 2005, 5:06am

on 12/08/05 at 06:29:52, killerabbit wrote:
Is there an outline?is there a draft for this?I mean come on.LMAO!This is AD-LIP!Correct me if I am wrong :PI thought we were having fun here.LOL>Some people.ROFLMAO


There is no outline here. We mean, that we should stick to the story line, no matter who the poster wants to act for.

I suppose that we all know what does "preview" mean. So, we can say here anything about the "A Game of Love " story. Wether we are against with the idea , we like it, or anything we can say about the author, about certain thing that you like, you didn't like, you are sad about, and even talk about the scene that confuses you. That's giving a preview. And if we give previews, no one should against it.  Everyone has his/her own understanding about the story. It's the same as giving preview of a certain book, such as CS Lewis. Some are against it. Some admire him. Some question his story.

Actually, this is fun.  ;D

By the way, I miss you, my Waldo  :-[ Hihihi.

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d` PrEv
Post by okasantina on Dec 9th, 2005, 7:00am
This is the thread for we can talk about the Story! Thats it......any reactions, comments or suggestions are all appreciated.  Laugh about, talk about....  ;D ....  


I wonder what happened to MIchael  ::) The German guy  :) lol! STUFF

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by thebeast on Dec 9th, 2005, 10:39pm

on 12/08/05 at 06:29:52, killerabbit wrote:
Is there an outline?is there a draft for this?I mean come on.LMAO!This is AD-LIP!Correct me if I am wrong :PI thought we were having fun here.LOL>Some people.ROFLMAO


Well its gonna be real confusing if u say in one post the character is in love with someone then in the next post the same character isnt..thats the point I am trying to make. Thats y i say u gotta read the stories and just add on to the story but dont change anything previous without some logical reason.

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by CooCHie on Dec 10th, 2005, 3:32am
LMAO!!!
What is the beauty of this game is we do not know what poster would write next, however, what joel meant is to stick to the story line..Each character has its own descriptive manners, what they do, or what is happening in their life.  We can add something  to whom  that particular  favorite character as long as you go with the flow of the story line.  We can introduce another name but again, it is up to another poster if he/she has an idea about certain character that is either just a name or a main character to the story line.  Suspense and the creativity of each poster makes this story interesting...good writing joel. and krissy..and wabbit..dang what a juicy love affair going on with   Waldo and Maria...Hmmm seems like Waldo has some motive?  Does he know Michael Smith before?  well let us stay tune and find out..lol ::) :P

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by Wicked_Witch on Dec 10th, 2005, 4:49am
Let me add mine here. Ok, we write the story as we all go along. Of course we cannot expect everyone to understand the story because it really get confusing at times. Especially when a character brings in a new situation or a new character in the story. Ok, the trick guys is for the next reader/poster to create her/his own story lines IN CONNECTION with the ongoing STORY, not just the scenes. Like what Rabbit and Joel did in that episode where Waldo  made a mental case of Michael, and Beast's response to that. That was brilliant, guys...I salute you both. [smiley=clap.gif]Great going!!!!

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by nOrKAy on Dec 10th, 2005, 4:55am

I'm already on page 12 on this online love story. I am having a big smile upon reading it and really, the story is getting interesting. Now, I think the climax is here--the truth is going to be revealed! I just hope Maria won't get heart attack.

I'm just kinda confused, about the "soundtrack" ! Or, is it a background and a reflection on the true motive of Waldo? I belive that does not reflect Maria ,too. I can't wait to turn next page. And personaly, I wish Michael died. But well, wether he is going to die or live, I want to see how Maria and Waldo work for their relationship. Despite of the fact that Waldo didn't mean to fall in love with Maria, he fell in love and he is so much --irrefutably ! :)


I will continue to read this tomorrow. I need to go shopping for stockings, it's getting really cold here in Hong Kong.  ;D

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d` PrEv
Post by okasantina on Dec 10th, 2005, 5:15pm
I think i just have to cut and paste it here ... so everyone can read it....between Krissy and Joel...lets find out if they will kill each other  lmao!

** Please begin the reading at the bottom first...ty  ;D



23:16: thebeast: well does waldo or michael or maria or rebbecca or any character exsist?
23:15: nOrKAy: Hahaha. Hey, I am,duh. Do you think those Talonians exist, Joel?
23:15: thebeast: so u say that life in space is not possible?
23:14: thebeast: what i type is realisitic if u think its not then u not have an open mind
23:14: nOrKAy: and I dont think those talonians thing is real LOL
23:13: nOrKAy: I mean , that they are happening in real life.
23:13: nOrKAy: Nooo, Joel. I mean, if possible I want the scenes to be realistic.....
23:12: thebeast: i think i have been fair with all the characters
23:12: nOrKAy: Tina  
23:11: nOrKAy: no, its our personal feedback as the characters, not feedback to the whole story, so better here.
23:11: thebeast: lol  
23:11: thebeast: oh and i guess what u type is realistic then
23:10: nOrKAy: Tina, hahaha
23:10: nOrKAy: But the Talonians...geeez, you're making the story unrealistic.haha
23:09: okasantina: why dont u both talk that in the feedback eh?  
23:09: nOrKAy: Yes, but we're more secure if he dies.LOL
23:09: thebeast: got to be something other than love in stories or it will get boring in my opinion
23:07: thebeast: michael not love maria anymore so how could he be thorn?
23:07: nOrKAy: scene*
23:07: nOrKAy: But the Talonians! hahaha. Weird secen you input Joel. LMAO.  
23:06: nOrKAy: He is not , but he is the thorn. So, its better for him to be out of sight.Haha
23:05: thebeast: he trying to do good with his power  
23:04: nOrKAy: Yeah, I know you sucks, Michael. But your power will end, anyway.  
23:03: thebeast: i kind of like michael  
23:03: thebeast: i not know y everyone haten on micheal he not that bad of a charachter
23:02: thebeast: u cant kill michael all he will do is come back he can travel through time.
23:01: nOrKAy: Well, yes Joel, but we can do another story and not like Michael's role.  
23:01: thebeast: kind of flaws
23:01: thebeast: and it looks like waldo loves u he just not as wonderful as he seems...all the characters have some  
23:00: nOrKAy: But I love Waldoooooooooo! Waaaa  
22:59: thebeast: the story is supposed to continue and go on  
22:59: thebeast: well kris thats kind of selfish  
22:57: nOrKAy: I will make Michael die! Thats how I am when I am in love!  
22:56: thebeast: i not gonna kill any characters kris
22:56: thebeast: lol  
22:56: nOrKAy: Joel, act also as Waldo , so you wont die  
22:55: thebeast: kirs michael time traveler its no possible to kill him  
22:55: nOrKAy: Joel, yes. I am going to make the next Episode!!! Haha
22:54: nOrKAy: Joel, hi  
22:54: thebeast: kris want michael to die  
22:54: nOrKAy: you refresh the page Saffy
22:53: nOrKAy: No guests are not allowed
22:53: thebeast: hello kris  


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Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d` PrEv
Post by okasantina on Dec 10th, 2005, 5:47pm
Continuation.. ;D [smiley=popcorn.gif] [smiley=lat2.gif]
Again pls read at the bottom first  ;D


23:48: nOrKAy: LMAO. hahaha Ooooooooo Waldo, where are you  
23:48: nOrKAy: No I mean my suffering from fighting my love for Waldo, Joel.LOL
23:47: thebeast: kris there is no battle here
23:46: nOrKAy: OK, but I will win the battle and Michael will die. I can feel now.Wahahaha
23:45: thebeast: i didnt cooch did kris
23:44: CooCHie: just wait and see ..that would be the next episode krissy  
23:44: nOrKAy: LMAO Joel, and why did you bring the question  
23:44: nOrKAy: I am trying to be so nice but dang, it seems that I wont stop suffering
23:44: thebeast: its not important if michael is nuts whats important is the story  
23:43: thebeast: i not answer anything he could be or he couldnt  
23:43: nOrKAy: Thats what i didnt want, Coochie! Waaa.Isnt it weird?
23:43: CooCHie: well, maria is so nice to get her boiling now..lol  
23:42: nOrKAy: Oh, answer your question, Joel. Is he
23:42: CooCHie: well dont involve nova joel..dangit..lol  
23:42: nOrKAy: and my gun is ready for Michael.Hahahaha
23:42: thebeast: but is michael really nuts or is what is happening to him real
23:41: nOrKAy: Tina yes. Hahaha

23:41: CooCHie: tina..hahahha  
23:41: nOrKAy: Waaa, Joel. I am not. It just weird to me that an alien is involved, which I think aliens dont exist
23:41: okasantina: until now u two discussing about it? lmao!
23:40: CooCHie: they are krissy its just a pigment of michael's imagination if i can understand
23:40: thebeast: nobody is perfect  
23:40: thebeast: kris just upset cuz waldo has flaws just like michael lol  
23:39: nOrKAy: as long as the characters are all human and not alien,wahahaha
23:39: nOrKAy: Yes I know and I dont mind Coochie , no matter how much obstacles lovers are going through
23:38: thebeast: kris i am not michael michael is a character
23:38: CooCHie: krissy want michael to die..lol oh lordy  
23:38: thebeast: u are clever cooch lol  
23:38: nOrKAy: Yes, goooo to Iraq!!! Bwahahahaha
23:38: CooCHie: there is not always a perfect love affair..lol  
23:38: nOrKAy: Good idea Joel, so that you will die there!  
23:37: CooCHie: well that is the beauty of it..some experience those kind of episode in real life  
23:37: thebeast: he gonna try to make things right
23:36: CooCHie: well, that is the clue krissy..lol michael is going nuts cause of his experience in the war..lol  
23:36: nOrKAy: But joel, keeps the alien role going, so it seems to be real, and not just imagination
23:36: thebeast: but michael also heading to Iraq
23:35: thebeast: michael is in the north dallas sanitarium  
23:35: nOrKAy: hahaha
23:35: nOrKAy: I want suspense and unpredictable scenes, but involvement of aliens?? Geeez, weird and unrealistic.H
23:35: CooCHie: the poster where the story line goes..lol
23:35: CooCHie: i guess u can find out if its just michael imagination or real how ever u can direct to go..its up  
23:34: CooCHie: what a twist..of character now..lol  
23:33: CooCHie: well that is the good part..lol  
23:31: nOrKAy: Yeah and he bewilders me ,big time!
23:28: CooCHie: writing's joel seems to be out of this world all the time  
23:27: CooCHie: well is michael in the nut house or is just an illusion?
23:27: CooCHie: lol krissy  
23:26: nOrKAy: Coohie, I want Michael to die now. I love Waldo.  
23:25: CooCHie: hahaha guyssss...lol  
23:24: nOrKAy: the story will come out like a realy life story.
23:23: nOrKAy: LOL Joel. I mean characters should be all people, and not Aliens,so that.....
23:21: okasantina: waiting who will gonna be killed first here...(whistling)

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by CooCHie on Dec 10th, 2005, 8:55pm
Well, the confusion lies within the story line.  Tina the preview commentator did it again..She captures the conversation of our best writer in the story....Lol Witchy is getting clueless where the story is going..lol and im going nuts ...I might be going next to Michael in the sanitarium soon..lol jk...
What I think is happening is Michael Smith, due to his experience in Irag, he is being taunted now.  His illusion of Rebecca, his time to travel is happening while he is in the sanitarium..He got admitted there .  It is up to the readers how they interprete what is going on and where the story line is heading.  We as a reader might have different opinion of what the writer is thinking next.  This is where the game begins because we never know.  As Krissy points out, she interprete Michael's illusion(if that is an illusion) to be unrealistic thought..To some it is.  To others it feels real because that is what is going on through their mind.  No one can say that is not real until they experience or be psychological unbalance in their life. What Joel is portraying as a writer,  some people life, real life stories that is happening in our sorroundings.  We hear stories about the war and some are being affected by it.  Yes, it is true love stories should be great but it will be boring if we dont have spice and tragedy that we have to encounter.  It wont be as challenging if we have a perfect love affairs going...So this is my preview of what is going on...Some might have different views of it...That is how we created a great story..how u views how the story goin to be...It is ur creative thoughts to add what is going on or what u think is going to happen next...so let get back to our programming...lol Just dont forget to stick to the story line...THe flows of the story has to connect. to the next poster/writer or to the previous story of each character.

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d` PrEv
Post by Saffire_65 on Dec 11th, 2005, 2:47am
Ok gals just to ease your confusion let me try to interpret what joel is trying to explain here.  Waldo wanted to avenge the death of his son who died in iraq while fighting the stupid war.  He blamed it on Liutenant Micheal Smith for whatever reason I dont know ... maybe he thought Micheal did not do a good job at taking care of his platoon. oh well . so with the meeting with an alien nova, micheal acquired the power to travel before time and this is important.  This is what he intend to do to go back before time to meet rebecca whom he lost the first chance to have her laid  LOL and also to go back to iraq to undo what had gone wrong which prolly could have saved waldo's son from death.

I hope i havent confused you gals even more. LMBO. Its just how i read and see it in the whole episode.  Well krissy if you killed Micheal then all those things will not get done and Waldo will not get his son back.  So what good is it to have Micheal killed? He would get arrested and then he wouldnt have any chance to marry Maria.  So would you prefer that way, to be widowed long before you walk down the isle? LMBO  Anybody could change the storyline at anytime.  Just keep close watch of it and continue to be creative of how to divert the story line back on track so that Maria will not lose Waldo  ;)  

Anyhow everybody who contributed in the story  especially the regular writers:  krissy, coochie, witchy and esp. joel who added interesting twist in the storyline deserve a good pat on the back [smiley=grouphug.gif] and thumbs up for their creativeness in writing.  YOU GO GUYS! CHEERS  [smiley=icon_drink2.gif]

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d` PrEv
Post by thebeast on Dec 11th, 2005, 3:25am
Look i gonna explain the way this works and i not trying to control any characters..but this is the way it needs to be done. stitch post that Waldo was taken to the sanitarium in dallas...then i pick up where he left off. Kris post that Waldo left to take care of something b4 they go off on vacation... I pick up at Waldo driving home. Tina post Rebbeca going to bed with Michael and I pick up there the same setting. Now I made it clear where michael was heading...couldnt of made it more clear...He was heading for Iraq to try to save billy joe. If the poster want to post he should of written something in that direction...I not care what it is but something to do with Michael being in Iraq and trying to save Billy joe. Then and poster should make clear when he or she ends that post the direction the character should go. You have to pick up the story where the previous left off but then you end in direction you want to go. Thats the only way its gonna work and not be confusing


Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by nOrKAy on Dec 11th, 2005, 4:33am
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Waaa! Hahaha! My gosh ,Tina dear! I didnt know you were lurking on me and Joel's convo on the shout box, and pasting here! Wahahaha. My gosh, this is making me laughing really really loud in the morning,here. Haha!

Anyway, LOL, you guys might thought I didn't get the story. I do get it  and it's really getting so thrilling because of Joel's entries. I was JUST WHINING to him. Hahahaha. Because I hate the alien. LMAO. Haha.

Now Chris almost killed Michael :O. Haha!

Go ahead , guys!  ;D  :)

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by killerabbit on Dec 11th, 2005, 5:04am
Well said tina!woohoo!As for me guys...I am not confused a bit.I understand everything perfectly.And it will be a best seller.Look at all the talented writers we have here.:P :P

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d` PrEv
Post by okasantina on Dec 11th, 2005, 5:11am
As you can see...the story is only just beginning  [smiley=hopcat2.gif]...and all of us are making it intesively interesting  [smiley=computer.gif]...as of others who may think its a crazy thing to take time reading the story well....ure wrong! cuz u missed half of ure life..buahahhaha!  Ure not "IN" ... meaning u belong to other world and be alien of ure own.  So for those who wanted to join and be of the those characters in the story dont waste ure time and be one!  [smiley=firejump.gif]...just make it sure you know the whole story ...   [smiley=018.gif] Me encouragin others to contribute their writing ability to create on their own as long as it sticks to the line... and to those who unremarkably doin their job in participating as a writer in the story ... I am very impressed  [smiley=cat36.gif] cuz this means that were not doin it just to have fun u know? but were doin it to let people know that we have our own special talents to create such story like this one.  Who knows someone out there is reading it..and might become a best seller someday  [smiley=huepfenicon111.gif]... ahem! ;D  [smiley=icon_drink2.gif]  Keep it up!  ;D :)

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by killerabbit on Dec 11th, 2005, 5:15am
*ZZZZZZZZZZAAAAAAPPPPPP*!!!!!! [smiley=stooge_curly.gif] [smiley=stooge_moe.gif] [smiley=stooge_larry.gif]

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by Wicked_Witch on Dec 11th, 2005, 5:36am
Lol, the reason I got confused was that I have been out for a while and has not followed the story lines. First time I came to check, there are mental case, murder, revenge, flashbacks ;DI want to put the links back together so but I do not know where to begin or even how to do it because there has to be a connections within the story lines we posts and I'm not sure where I am now!!Anyway, Cooch has already explained what she wants to happen and since she's the author, I am following her story lines/thoughts. We're having fun here, eh? Love you, guys!!! ;D

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d` PrEv
Post by okasantina on Dec 11th, 2005, 8:41am
[smiley=omfg.gif]Imagine!??? All the while i didnt know that Michael has some kind of a mental disorder ... Michael is SICK!  :o Those are only Halucinations???!  :o   U mean that episode is only a dellusion?? Wow this wil be more exciting!  [smiley=hopcat2.gif] [smiley=roll.gif]poor Michael.. oh! maybe thats why he cant decide to stick to one girl?  ::) how can he go back to war if he has some serious problems ... now he dont know when is real or not eh... hmmm...what else is he planning next.  I think he should stay in sanitarium and drink his  [smiley=chillpill.gif] for him to get back to Rebecca or Maria or whoever he wanted... ...  That talonian thing is only a dellusion and the Nova girl...awwwwww [smiley=bigcry.gif] ...........

But u know ... i like the story goin now...it might come back to the real love story i hope  ::)   ;D [smiley=icon_drink2.gif]

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by Wicked_Witch on Dec 27th, 2005, 6:34am
Humnn..I take it Waldo and Maria and Karen, Rebecca and Michael are on holidays or busy campaigning? ;D

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by CooCHie on Dec 27th, 2005, 7:33am

on 12/27/05 at 06:34:10, Wicked_Witch wrote:
Humnn..I take it Waldo and Maria and Karen, Rebecca and Michael are on holidays or busy campaigning? ;D


They have to take some vacation too Witchy.. [smiley=juggle.gif] [smiley=juggle.gif] [smiley=juggle.gif]

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by nOrKAy on Dec 29th, 2005, 6:03pm

Maria is back. LOL.

As I was doing a review of the previous pages, I am laughing at the scene in the hospital about Michael, acted by Wabbit. I really laughed out loud about the doctors' equipment he mentioned. Drill and saw ? :o  [smiley=roll.gif] Man.... those are carpenters' tools !!! [smiley=roll.gif] [smiley=roll.gif] [smiley=roll.gif]

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by CooCHie on Dec 29th, 2005, 6:49pm

on 12/29/05 at 18:03:45, nOrKAy wrote:
Maria is back. LOL.

As I was doing a review of the previous pages, I am laughing at the scene in the hospital about Michael, acted my Wabbit. I really laughed out loud about the doctors' equipment he mentioned. Drill and saw ? :o  [smiley=roll.gif] Man.... those are carpenters' tools !!! [smiley=roll.gif] [smiley=roll.gif] [smiley=roll.gif]

lmao KRISSY!!!! WELCOME BACK MARIA.
Well I guess Waldo still on vacation eh or maybe he got stuck campaigning for PRESIDENT!!!

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by Wicked_Witch on Jan 5th, 2006, 8:31pm
Shall we pick up where we left off now? ;D

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d` PrEv
Post by okasantina on Jan 5th, 2006, 8:38pm
Yeah i think we need to make it a little hotter...make it warm now witchy.....holiday season ended na eh....so why not continue the loving feeling eh...now thats Valentines is almost coming eh  ;) :)

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by okasantina on Jan 5th, 2006, 8:40pm

on 12/29/05 at 18:03:45, nOrKAy wrote:
Maria is back. LOL.

As I was doing a review of the previous pages, I am laughing at the scene in the hospital about Michael, acted by Wabbit. I really laughed out loud about the doctors' equipment he mentioned. Drill and saw ? :o  [smiley=roll.gif] Man.... those are carpenters' tools !!! [smiley=roll.gif] [smiley=roll.gif] [smiley=roll.gif]



LMAO!!! maybe he thought that the hospital has a hardware store in it... ;D

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by CooCHie on Jan 7th, 2006, 4:31pm

on 01/05/06 at 20:40:20, okasantina wrote:
LMAO!!! maybe he thought that the hospital has a hardware store in it... ;D


He must have been absent minded again.  He thought it was HOME DEPOT!!!(well known hardware store in the states}


Ok OK..we need to get it on with the game of love again.  Wonder what happen to Michael and Waldo now. ;D ;D

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d` PrEv
Post by okasantina on Jan 19th, 2006, 7:03pm
I wish i wish those male characters involved here will get back on their jobs.... :-/  me wanna know why they need to take this all seriously  >:( :-/

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by Wicked_Witch on Jan 20th, 2006, 4:39am

on 01/05/06 at 20:38:48, okasantina wrote:
Yeah i think we need to make it a little hotter...make it warm now witchy.....holiday season ended na eh....so why not continue the loving feeling eh...now thats Valentines is almost coming eh  ;) :)



I need someone to initiate a love scene first, pards. Don't wanna shock anyone buy just writing steamy scenes when the characters are doing some shopping or riding a train! [smiley=crazysmile.gif] [smiley=crazysmile.gif] [smiley=crazysmile.gif]But i will be glad to supply the necessary acts. ;)

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by nOrKAy on Jun 28th, 2006, 4:09pm





WaldOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooo !!! echo~~~~~~.....


:'(   [smiley=roll.gif]

Title: Re: FeEdBaCkS:  "A Game of Love" d`
Post by CooCHie on Jun 29th, 2006, 6:40pm

on 06/28/06 at 16:09:46, nOrKAy wrote:
WaldOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooo !!! echo~~~~~~.....


:'(   [smiley=roll.gif]

Yeah what happen to waldoooooooooooo and Mariaaaaaaaaa



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